UNREQUITED LOVE

You know there's no love from your audience if over a third of them walk out of the theatre before it's over. Sad but true. The first 10 seconds had me thinking it was a student film, mind you some student films are great, perhaps, the visual style was meant to portray that of surveillance, but this is not your typical documentary. There are no interviews, and pretty much all the dialogue is voiceover. There is a lady who is stalking someone and being stalked herself (oddly enough, this sounds like the plot of my first short film, haha) and a man who presumably is a writer about stalking and typing and talking during the film. This would work much better as a narrative film, if cleverly written, to better inform and educate about stalking.